Bicycling
Halsey veers from bike tragedy to ethnic generalizations
There were several recent items in the Washington Post that deserve their own articles to respond to. Most glaring of these is the Ashley Halsey piece Saturday about the tragic crash that killed a cyclist and a driver in Fairfax.
Since I often harp on press accounts making it sound like the driver wasn't controlling the vehicle by using passive voice or making the vehicle the subject of the sentence, it's worth noting that Halsey made the driver the subject of the sentence, specifically to not that he really did "lose control" of his vehicle.
The driver and vehicle then crossed a median, hit two cyclists, and then crashed into a tree. One cyclist died, as did the driver. Saddest of all, this happened on Bike to Work Day, though the cyclist, a 17-year-old high school athlete, was not riding to work.
Unfortunately, the article then veers into a very disappointing and unchallenged argument that stereotypes Latino immigrant cyclists as being responsible for crashes.
The majority of the half-dozen cyclist deaths in the past five years have involved Latino immigrants riding to or from work in the dark."You want to be careful about stereotyping, but you have to look at the circumstances," said Fairfax Detective Scott Neville, who investigates traffic fatalities. "As much as you hate to say it, it's often a certain socioeconomic class."
Neville is the same detective who seemed to blame bicycle commuters for riding in the County's poor conditions in Halsey's last article.
Halsey cites three examples of cyclist deaths involving Latino immigrants, and he or Neville plays up the cyclists wearing darker clothes and not wearing helmets. But as Ken Archer pointed out in one of many tips submitting this article, those deaths involved one hit-and-run driver, one underage drunk driver, and one driver who hit someone in a crosswalk. What race and socioeconomic class were those drivers? For all we know, rich white people are responsible for most of the cyclist deaths in Fairfax.
There could be some valid public safety conclusions to be drawn from looking at racial and economic factors in cyclist crashes, but this article doesn't come close to demonstrating any.
FABB plans to meet with Detective Neville, and notes that the intersection in question is particularly bad for cyclists. As far as anyone can tell, the cyclists were waiting by the side of the road for a legal chance to cross.
Sunday, the Post profiles the two families. And the high school athlete cyclist, Abdelouahid Chadli? North African, not Latino.
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As far as I can tell, a "majority" of a half-dozen is 4 or more. 3 Latino/a deaths is less than 4. Or at least it used to be.
by Matt Johnson on May 24, 2010 11:17 am • link • report
by Robin on May 24, 2010 11:46 am • link • report
by Rich on May 24, 2010 11:54 am • link • report
by aaa on May 24, 2010 12:00 pm • link • report
by MLD on May 24, 2010 12:06 pm • link • report
From my vantage point as a pedestrian in DC, the Anglos are the ones far more likely to blow through stop signs and red lights and cycle at speeds that make it more difficult for them to avoid potential trouble. The Hispanics typically are the ones toodling along on the sidewalks (which is something of an issue for us walkers), and they do stop for traffic rather than try to out-race it.
My observations are very likely incomplete and subject to the usual biases, but I don't see the habits of working-class Hispanic cyclists as a safety issue at all, except for the near-universal lack of helmets.
by Matt W on May 24, 2010 12:30 pm • link • report
I'm not sure the data really shows much. Riding without a helmet is not a safety issue as much as a class issue in the US. The sidewalk riding is bad, but a lot of bikers do it. The "mexicans" i see do have beater bikes, but the bike themselves look better maintained than the hipster bikes I see downtown in terms of chains, brakes etc.
by charlie on May 24, 2010 12:31 pm • link • report
(1) I am actually a daily bicyclist myself.
(2) I was not writing a policy article, but an accident description article. To go beyond the detective's description of most bike incidents themselves and start writing about Fairfax County policies would make it a policy article.
The problem with this argument is that describing the root cause of an "accident" does not make it a policy article, it makes it a more accurately descriptive "accident" article. To ask why working class Latinos are often the victims here, and then report that Fairfax County is not meeting the needs of its new working class immigrants who can't afford cars, is no different than reporting that poor Latinos are biking without helmets or reflective gear. It's just a better, more thorough and accurate description of the accidents themselves.
by Ken Archer on May 24, 2010 12:34 pm • link • report
by ksu499 on May 24, 2010 1:18 pm • link • report
And lights??
by David desJardins on May 24, 2010 1:19 pm • link • report
by Robin on May 24, 2010 1:51 pm • link • report
The helmets and lights thing is a cultural difference. I'm wondering if something like the Mt. Pleasant bike swap might be an appropriate venue for educating Hispanic cyclists about safety concerns in a low-key way.
by Matt W on May 24, 2010 1:55 pm • link • report
Even motorcyclists seem to care more about the rules of the road and their own life & limb than bicyclists.
by Martin on May 24, 2010 2:09 pm • link • report
If the out-of-control car swerved into a cafe instead, would we blame the patrons for recklessly enjoying their coffee near the window without helmets on?
by andrew on May 24, 2010 2:40 pm • link • report
by Miriam on May 24, 2010 2:55 pm • link • report
Motorists in general piss me off. Cutting through traffic, running red lights and stop signs, and generally acting like the rules of the road don't apply to them. Hey morons, if you wanna use the road then follow its laws. Otherwise fuck off.
Even motorcyclists seem to care more about the rules of the road and their own life & limb than drivers.
by Matthias on May 24, 2010 3:14 pm • link • report
by kate on May 24, 2010 3:20 pm • link • report
by Erik Wemple on May 24, 2010 5:53 pm • link • report
Thanks for sharing your perspective. I agree the first part is good, but am not willing to just chalk this up to collecting information. To me the article amounts to: "A driver killed himself and a cyclist. The cyclist was north African. Meanwhile, some Fairfax officer said it's all those damn Latinos."
Context is everything. It's important what facts are selected. If the piece was just reporting the news, don't go making a really sketchy racial generalization on the side. If you're looking at the racial issue, make sure to get more than one officer's reaction.
by David Alpert on May 24, 2010 6:10 pm • link • report
Gets right to the point and there's no fluff involved.
May not be totally obvious to newcomers, but hey, there's a biking program you can learn about!
by C. R. on May 24, 2010 11:32 pm • link • report
The article was half-baked.
However, independent of this article, if you drive North/South on Georgia Avenue from Conn Avenue to Aspen Hill after hours you see people darting across the road -- from all angles and directions -- usually dressed in dark clothes.
Not to say this is "socioeconomic" phenom -- but the same is true when you drive down certain strips of DC. The behavior you observe in crossing the street, let's say at Good Hope Rd SE or Georgia Avenue NW -- is noticeably different than what occurs on let's say Wisconsin Avenue.
Just an observation.
by Johnny Uptown on May 25, 2010 10:19 am • link • report
by Erik Wemple on May 25, 2010 1:55 pm • link • report
by Bianchi on May 25, 2010 2:13 pm • link • report
http://thewashingtonsyndicate.wordpress.com/2010/03/06/erik-wemple-and-the-city-papers-hood-pass-revoked/
by Johnny Uptown on May 25, 2010 2:19 pm • link • report
There's been a lot of thoughtful commentary on the piece.
A couple of points need clarification. Neville isn't either anti-cycling or racist. If my first piece left anyone with the impression that he was anti-cycling they should read his quote with a more objective eye. His point was that recreational cyclists/commuters tend to exhibit safer biking habits than those who are riding through necessity and who may be less familiar with traffic and the rules of the road.
As to the second point and the piece about Friday's fatal, its intent has been misread by enough people to convince me that I did Neville a disservice and muddled the point which I intended to make.
First, the background. For the intial piece, which was published Thursday, I reviewed every bike crash fatality in the region since 2006. I followed up by asking to interview the investigating officers for most of them. Montgomery County police sought to be as unhelpful as they could, but Fairfax arranged for me to talk with Neville and we spent a morning reviewing the files.
One of the things that already had surprised me in reviewing the overall regional bike fatality cases was that so many of them happened at night, particularly at times when few recreational/commuter cyclists are on the road.
I asked Neville about that, and his files provided the answer. His comment, which appeared in the story about Friday's bike fatal, was in response to my question about why there were so many nighttime bike fatals.
Now, getting to the story which you find troubling. I need to take you inside the sausage factory. Please don't take what follows as a defense of it, because I offer it by way of explanation only. The story is what it is, and the points that you and others have raised are well made and well taken by me.
The crash occurred just after 4 p.m. and the story was being posted live to our website with every bit of new information I could get from various police contacts in Fairfax. It grew sentence by sentence, and is often the case, some of the early information had to be corrected when more accurate stuff became available.
On the fly, and less artfully than (in hindsight) I would have liked, I did a notebook dump in the second half of the piece, with the goal of pointing out how this accident was distinctly different than most of the recent bike fatals in Fairfax. It happened in daylight, and the cyclist was on a bike path.
There wasn't any intent to blame the cyclist, as some have suggested, or raise false issue of ethnicity. The story, as Erik has pointed out, didn't intend to diminish Latinos by relating the frequency with which they have died, but, instead, to point out the vulnerability that their circumstances create. A guy doesn't ride a kids bike home in the dark after midnight on a frigid night because that's he's first choice. I wish I'd done a better job of making that point clear.
Finally, we anticipated a late-night update from Fairfax that would result in a complete write-thru of the piece. Through no fault of the police, the update never came, and that banged-out-in-a-hurry piece stood. Had I thought that was going to happen I would have gone back into it to smooth out the bumps.
In hindsight, I wish I had.
Best,
Ashley
(Two personal notes: using the III in my byline reflects not an attitude, but a desire that the few people who notice bylines might be clued in to the fact that I'm a guy. And, yes, I ride. I'm certified as a cycling coach by USACyling and USAT.)
by Ashley Halsey on May 25, 2010 3:03 pm • link • report
by Bianchi on May 25, 2010 3:26 pm • link • report
Thank you so much for stopping by and giving us your perspectives.
I understand completely how articles can be rushed and not come out as we hope. Believe me, I've written plenty of articles on the blog here which I later realized didn't come out as I intended.
Usually when that happens, I realize it because other people post in the comments to say that they think I was off base. I hope that the feedback from this forum provided a similar value.
Perhaps I should make it more clear more frequently, but I really appreciate the work that our area's reporters do, and I have enjoyed many of your articles, as I've said before. I know it's not an easy job to get the "first draft of history" correct.
Thanks for giving us your thoughts and for taking the feedback in the spirit of constructive improvement. (And if and when I write something that's worthy of some criticism as well, please feel free to let me know!)
by David Alpert on May 25, 2010 3:39 pm • link • report
by Scoot on May 25, 2010 4:38 pm • link • report
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